LR Task

Your audience essay learner response is as follows:

 Create a new blog post called 'Audience essay feedback and learner response' and complete the following tasks:

 1) Copy and paste your feedback from the email in full - WWW, EBI and LR.
WWW:
·         You’ve delivered a 500 word essay and covered the three industries.
·         You’ve clearly picked out some key points from the lessons and notes such as citizen journalism, audience consumption habits (‘binge watching’).
·         You’ve offered a conclusion that offers an opinion on the question.

EBI:
·         You need to work on your paragraph structure and in particular topic sentences – the first sentence in a paragraph. Make sure it focuses on the question and develops your argument.
·         Clearer sentence structure – pay more attention to spelling, grammar and word choice. You have relevant content but you need to proofread your work to check it makes grammatical sense for your reader. At GCSE level, good written English is essential!

LR:
·         Complete the LR tasks on the GCSE Media Year 1 blog – Audience and Industry essay feedback LR



2) What was the word count for your essay?
The word count is 503 words

3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
The strongest paragraph is the 1st paragraph

4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?

The 2nd one
5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?

By working on my paragraph structure

 6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.
One thing that i have learnt is that anyone can access personal information

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